Friday, February 28, 2025

Sentence Structure

Run-on sentences and comma splices are two common sentence structure mistakes that can make writing confusing. While they may seem similar, they are different errors:

  • A run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses (complete sentences) are joined incorrectly without proper punctuation or a conjunction.
  • A comma splice happens when two independent clauses are incorrectly joined by only a comma.

Let’s look at examples of both errors and how to fix them.

Run-on Sentences

A run-on sentence happens when two complete thoughts are put together without punctuation or a conjunction.

🔴 Incorrect:
👉 She loves to read she spends hours at the library.
(Two independent clauses are joined with no punctuation.)

Ways to Fix It:

  1. Use a period:
    She loves to read. She spends hours at the library.
  2. Use a semicolon:
    She loves to read; she spends hours at the library.
  3. Use a comma + coordinating conjunction:
    She loves to read, so she spends hours at the library.

Comma Splices

A comma splice occurs when two independent clauses are joined only by a comma, which is not strong enough to connect them.

🔴 Incorrect:
👉 It started to rain, we ran inside.
(A comma alone cannot join these two complete sentences.)

Ways to Fix It:

  1. Use a period:
    It started to rain. We ran inside.
  2. Use a semicolon:
    It started to rain; we ran inside.
  3. Use a comma + coordinating conjunction:
    It started to rain, so we ran inside.
  4. Use a subordinating conjunction:
    When it started to rain, we ran inside.
Proper punctuation and conjunctions help keep your writing clear, avoiding run-ons and comma splices.